Which is worse example of bad writing: the Sith Dagger or Padme dying of Sadness

Padme, a healthy, educated woman in her mid 20’s who lives in a world of fantasy/sci-fi technology—had no prenatal care, didn’t know she was giving birth to twins and dies suddenly from the emotional distress of losing her abusive husband. Her last words show sympathy for her husband, not her kids.

Or the Ochi’s dagger, a map aligns with the horizon of the Death Star II wreckage—weather didn’t dramatically alter the horizon in the 14-year-long passage from the dagger’s crafting to its use. Directions on how to use knife are cryptic, the throne room was relatively intact and any effects of nuclear winter caused by the meteorite had subsided.